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Fun Time 4 Kids

the drawing and painting app

                                                                               Great fun!

by Randa Aladib This is a great app for kids who like being creative. You can use it to make fantastic pictures!

Positive points:

1 There are tools for painting and (1) drawings. My pictures look like real paintings and drawings!

2 You can send your pictures to your friends, and they can send you (2) Comments.

3 You can upload (3) Photos, too, and draw or paint on your photos.

4 You can (4) Print the pictures easily.

Negative points:

1 It opens too slowly. I had to wait for two (5) minutes after I typed my password!

2 I couldn’t (6) Upload photos at first, but it’s OK now.

How to Write a Review

Purpose

• A review tells other people what you think about an app or game.
• It includes both positive and negative points, so readers know the good and bad features.

Step 1: Plan

• Use notes first – you don’t need full sentences.
• Identify:
  1. What you liked (positive points)
  2. What was difficult or not perfect (negative points)

Example of planning notes:

• Positive: drawing tools, upload photos, print easily
• Negative: opens slowly, couldn’t upload photos at first

• Start with a simple sentence about the app/game.
• Example:
  • “FunTime4Kids is a great app for kids who like drawing.”
  • “TopCity is a fun game for children who enjoy solving problems.”

Usage:

• The introduction gives context. Readers know what the review is about.

Step 2: Write a Short Introduction

• Start with a simple sentence about the app/game.
• Example:
  • “FunTime4Kids is a great app for kids who like drawing.”
  • “TopCity is a fun game for children who enjoy solving problems.”

Usage:

• The introduction gives context. Readers know what the review is about.
• Step 3: Write Positive Points

• Use phrases like: “You can…”, “It helps you…”, “I like…”
• Use adjectives: brilliant, fantastic, easy, fun
• Use adverbs: easily, quickly, slowly

Example Sentences:

• “You can upload photos and send them to your friends.”
• “It is easy to use and very fun.”

Step 4: Write Negative Points

• Write what is difficult or annoying about the app.
• Use phrases like: “It opens too slowly”, “I couldn’t…”
• Use polite language: “but it’s okay now”

Example Sentences:

• “It opens slowly at first, but it works fine now.”
• “I couldn’t upload photos immediately, but it’s better now.”

Step 5: Check and Rewrite

Re-read your review.

Check spelling and grammar.

Make sure your positive and negative points are clear.

Step 6: Vocabulary & Phrases to Use

Phrase	Usage Example
You can…	“You can send photos to friends.”
I like…	“I like the drawing tools.”
It is…	“It is easy to use.”
Positive point	“A positive point is the upload feature.”
Negative point	“A negative point is that it opens slowly.”
Adjectives	brilliant, fantastic, fun, easy, difficult
Adverbs	easily, quickly, slowly